asa(e) sankirtan; writing
Please accept my obeisances to your adorable lotus feet, which I miss so much watching danceππππΊπΉπ΅
All Glories to Srila Prabhupada!!!πππ»ββοΈππΊπΉπΊππΊπΉπΊπππ΅
All Glories To You our Spiritual master!!!πππ»ββοΈππΊπΉππ΅ππΉπ
I hope I can please Uncle Gismo and that he will engage me in His serviceπππ»ββοΈ
always trying to please him:πππ»ββοΈπΉπΊππΊπΉπ΅
Radha Japa Prati Jalpa Devi dasi πΉππ΅π
I've been writing garbage since before I was a devotee, and when I first encountered the movement, the figure of Krishna and his beautiful face inspired me so much. He was and is my sole inspiration for writing. You and Srila Prabhupada's immense love! Everything combines to make my heart write. I never think, "Now I'm going to write." Sentences just come out, and I have to run to get paper and pencil so my songs or poems don't get lost.
Now, by Your mercy, I'll take some time out of the week to write. It's so beautiful. And then, do I send you my writings? In fact, before sending you my poems and songs, I always thought, while laughing, "Where is the current Ramananda Roy?" to show him my writings and see if they're appropriate, and if they don't have rasabasa... but I never asked who could read them before you. I just sent them to you. Please forgive the mistakes. So, what should I do? I've accumulated a lot of junkπ , a few more songs for Govinda... How should I refine them? Can I send you what I'm writing and polish it little by little? Whatever you say, it'll be a pleasure to continue.
I would like Uncle Gizmo to engage me in His service. Thank you, Gurumaharaja, and please forgive any unintentional offenses in this letter.
. I'm trying to please you:
JPJ Radha devi dasi
HpS/ASA - AgtSP.
First
write once. then edit right after you write for better grammar, choice of words, rhythm and rhyme.
Second
look at it after one week and edit again or shred it and use it for fire starter.
after one week you will not be able to remember the personal thoughts that you had while you were writing and which your reader will not know.
you will be able to read it much more like your audience is reading it.
Third
post it to the Blog and HpS/ASA will comment as best they can.